Thursday, February 25, 2010

Essay - Reworked

I've spent a lot of time on my essay this week, I think it's ready. Check it out:


I spent the last eight years working as a systems engineer with a degree in electrical engineering. In the last few years of my engineering career I no longer found my work enjoyable and realized I didn’t want to spend the rest of my life in a career I found unfulfilling. That time in my life was also marked by personal disappointment. My husband and I had hoped to start a family; unfortunately I found that every pregnancy doesn’t have a happy outcome. My passion for having a family was translated into a passion for finding out why I had suffered multiple losses. My doctor, who understood my dissatisfaction with my engineering career, gave me the nudge I needed to consider a career change to the medical field. After a short time of careful consideration I put all my effort toward taking the necessary steps to reach my goal.

I knew that a significant change in career direction would mean further education. Five years ago I would never have considered getting a masters degree. I struggled with the coursework for my electrical engineering degree. In choosing this new career direction I found that I needed to take several courses before applying to a program. As I complete these prerequisites, I’m enjoying my studies more than I ever thought possible.

As part of my patient contact hours I’ve been working as an assistant to the nurse practitioner in the office of my ob/gyn. I’ve also been able to witness first hand how to sensitively care for patients who are in physical and emotional pain. Compassion is a vital element of quality care. My own experiences will influence my approach to providing compassionate care to patients. Although my work in this office setting is very valuable, it is also specialized. Therefore I am in the process of enrolling in basic EMT training. Once completed, I plan to finish my patient contact hours as an EMT. I feel that this broaden my experience and better prepare me for the variety of challenges that your PA program will provide.

Along with my current full course load, patient contact hours and upcoming EMT training, I’m also involved in a workstudy position to inventory my college’s anatomy and physiology lab and a volunteer position at the library tutoring English. I enjoy my volunteering activities because of the opportunity it provides me to give back to the community and I feel that this further prepares me to work in the community after graduation.

I have often been told that things happen for a reason. When I reflect on the pivotal moments in my life I believe each choice led me down a better path. While a career in engineering isn’t for me, it was through this work that I met my husband. Likewise, my misfortunes in trying to start a family have led me to a new crossroads. By becoming a PA I believe I will find life work that will allow me to give myself to others in a way that will be both satisfying and rewarding.

5 comments:

Kelly said...

I think this is great. I especially like the last paragraph.

margaret said...

Fantastic!!! Shannon I am so proud of you to follow your heart and make such a drastic career change. I know you'll have much to offer patients dealing with loss because of your personal experiences. Sending you hugs

Sara said...

Looks good. Did you send yet? If not, add the word will to the last sentence of the third paragraph (before broaden). This path seems like a good fit--you sound so excited about it. I hope you get into your top choice program.

Shannon said...

It's sent! Thanks Sara for the find, you weren't the only one who noticed it so I caught it before it went out. I hit submit last night. I still have to do the "supplemental" application but it's a relief to have this beast done!

Unknown said...

I stumbled upon your blog while searching on the internet for information on how best to support those who have suffered the loss of a child. Sharing your thoughts and feelings not only helps those walking a similar path, but also helps people like me to be a better support system.

I have never commented on anybody's personal blog before, but can't move past yours without giving you a pat on the back and cheering you on for having the courage to go back to school and ultimately change careers. I was an EMT for 7 years before getting my Bachelor's in nursing. I have been an ICU nurse for 12 years now. Be it as an EMT or a PA, you will be a great healthcare provider! Being there to help people through the most trying times in their lives can be the most rewarding experience there is. Your patients will be lucky to have you! Godd luck!